Troy Stone PPV RP Feedback

[troystone]

Only asking because with everything that's been going on with me, mentally I was drained writing that RP. So I'm curious to how it turned out despite me not fully being in my right mind(I think). So yeah would love to hear what people think and see how good I was able to do with everything going on.

[Miss Amber]

You have had a lot go on, and I hope you will be OK man.

As for the rp, the flow was good. You really showed a lot of emotion and I read through and saw that. Writing is a good way to express how you feel after something like that. I give the rp a 9/10 for epicness.

[Noah Hanson]

you a great writer troy no doubt about, not sure how you managed to plop out a 7000 word rp with everything you have been through but i tip my hat to you for being able to. Personally and this is just my personal opinion not everyone is going to sit down and read a 7000 word short story. I mean it flowed well and can see the passion you have for the character but it i was always told that longer isnt always better because sometimes judges will also lose interest again not my view just what i have been told numerous times. .To give you an idea the rp i did for our match was the longest i did in at least 4 years just because i know your rep. You write well my friend. 8 out 10

[troystone]

Eh when I write I don't really care about length. Personally I prefer writing shorter(because I'm lazy) but I just write until I feel the story I want to tell has been told. Have always been a big believer in the quality over wunanity method so that's what I try to do.

[codair]

truthfully the flow was good, however i could not keep interest, the cd part of the rp was bit a dry for me. the length was a monster and i could took me a couple of goes, the shoot was ok. What i didnt like was

BTW, call me an old timer, been at this better part of 18 years.

'Better not." Troy laughs as Ophelia chuckles as well.

"Come on babe why would I downgrade myself when I'm with the HOTTEST babe evs huh?" Troy smiles before he finally gives Ophelia the jug of Rocky Road. "BTW told you i wouldn't forget about your ice cream."

"Oh that's good to know that I'm on your mind all the time."

"True story. BTW I'm sure I'm on yours as well. Your welcome BTW."."

BTW to me has no place in rps, unless the camera is on a cellphone showing a text, not the case.

Like everyone else. And BTW since you yourself has said that I'm champion only because of Hollywood and Zion, since you didn't obviously look this stuff up, you failed to understand that I won this title BEFORE we join forces.

You did it a couple of times, FYI was also used, however thats been common saying for years, a gripe of mine but oh well, gotta love TV.

Truthfully now this is my opinion not knowing the charector much, but the story and the shoot did not coincide, it was two opposite things and dont need to be together in an rp.The CD, ya would have been good with one part, not the two, it took away from the shoot.

Then again, I am also biased, im a firm believer all focus should be on the match, again old school. However that is my opinion.

[troystone]

Yeah. I've only been feding for four and a half years and I'm 19 so I know people in this game that's literally done this longer than I've been alive(it's true lol). But yeah I've heard about how the old guard of e-feding use to be in comparison to what it is now. To be honest everything I do with Troy is actually pretty old school in the sense of I try to not be fancy with him at all. In fact if you really look at Troy and what I do with him, it's simple old school heel stuff(from what I've seen on youtube). My promos are just simple heel stuff as my goal(being the heel) is to be the antogonist and promote my character to the point where people want to see them lose because promo is short for promotional and the main goal of promos should be to promote the match, the character, etc, etc. This is why i don't "bury" people with the trash talking.

But from where I learned how to RP, the CD is kinda the backstory of the on screen character and I try my best in the aspect of they're both kinda the same(done this plenty of times). The stuff with Ophy, with his agent, all part of his backstory. Gives this megalomaniac on the surfaces kinda an in depth reason to why he is megalomanic. So that's all I try to accomplish with his CDs while incorporating other characters(his siblings, his agent, Bruce, etc)The FYI and BTW that's a rib but it's kinda become his thing. The rib being that my friends usually text me that all the time and since I rarely do, I like to rib my friends by doing so ha

[codair]

ahhh so it was a joke to ya, i got ya.