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Matches

Caliban

Ojeda

Hollywood

Segments

TJ Codair

Jordan Caliban

Darin Zion

Adam Stryker

John Ojeda

Brian Hollywood

Judging

Hollywood

SHOW COMMENTS: Well I gotta say, that was a smooth transitioning show. It's definitely not as huge as Hostile Takeover, but for being a fallout show, it was kind of short. For the most part, show flowed well. There was a few segments to help the transition..but not by much.

Segments...what happened guys? It's like we went from top notch segment show to a we had a top notch segment show? Segments help the flow of the show but they really build the very foundation of the shows. Yes, matches are a big part, but segments help build feuds, start new confrontations...hell, even a few sentences would have been ok...there SEGMENTS! It doesn't have to be epic guys. Hell, I got a segment in the show literally maybe 3-4 lines long but the point got across. It works. Like I said, doesn't have to be long. It's still a segment and it gets things announced, happening, settled, continued, etc etc. whatever the case may be.

I will say this show was definitely a notch down from Hostile Takeover and I put the entire show together. I have no problem saying that. We had some awesome moments on the show, but guys, we can do SO much better! We proved that for Hostile Takeover. I was really hoping to keep this momentum up. After such a big show like that and such a huge success, I thought for sure we were gonna keep that wave up. Help me prove that was just a fluke and get that wave built back up next week! I'm launching the Code of Honor tonight as well. That's been in the revisions process and the editing works for the past several weeks now and I'm happy to finally get that out. You'll find everything in it that needs to be covered in it. But use it as a good reference point. It will also help out with what you guys are needing in your RPs and what I look for when I grade. On the same subject, I apologize for some feedback threads I've been missing to reply in...I am all about giving feedback but I've been busy with the Code of Honor, that I haven't been able to get to it. However, now its done and I've gotten everything I need in it, I can start focusing on all that and inputting my thoughts and feedback where its appropriate at.

Alright, enough of that. I'm turning this over to you guys to see what your thoughts on the show are. Be honest. Let me know how it was with the obvious feedback chart below, but give me your thoughts on it. I don't care if you tell me it sucked ass. Tell me it sucked ass. If it was badass tell me it was badass. I'm a guy for critique and even I could use the feedback so tell me like it is (TJ Codair, lol) I can take it. Hearing everything on a show can help better them in the future. You guys make the difference in the shows! Alright, sound off!

Match of the Night

Underrated Match of the Night

Segment of the Night

Break out Star

Face of the Night

Heel of the Night

Show Rating

Comments/Concerns

[codair]

Match of the Night-im a firm believer that the main event should always be the match of the night, with the swerve at the end and caliban cheating to win and of course the hollywood thing, id say caliban vs codair

Underrated Match of the Night- atwater vs. rhonin

Segment of the Night-Styker (welcome to the system)

Break out Star- Caliban with the picking up the ball and walking away thing. Makes me wonder whats going to happen next.

Face of the Nighte-Ojeda and the money cannon

Heel of the Night- Hollywood (douche bag) lol

Show Rating-81/2 of 10 I think we can seriously turn this shit up and make things better. Tween segs and matches, angles, twists and shit.

Comments/Concerns-real good show, hope we can keep the momentum going, my rating was maybe a little harsh but im a perfectionist.

[jordancaliban]

The only public thing I have to say is that I did not in anyway endorse the end of the main event and it was completely against my character and my wishes for how that character is to be handled in a match and the direction I have wanted to go in. I want that publicly known

[Noah Hanson]

i dont know most of the matches except the main event were extremely short. i don't know why, not asking for an explanation not even for mine and Blacks but wow you want people to lose interest having short matches when people are still busting their asses and rping and matches sometimes dont come close to the work put into the writers rps.

Match of the Night: main event

Underrated Match of the Night: i dont know if there could really be an underrated match.

Segment of the Night:the Hollywood/Codair angle

Break out Star:Caliban

Face of the Night: people keep saying Ojeda but i personally just dont see Ojeda as a face as i see as an antihero

Heel of the Night: Hollywood

Show Rating: I down grade for short matches, been staff in feds before so yeah. 6.5/10

Comments/Concerns: See the top....

[jordancaliban]

Well when nobody steps up like everyone seemed willing to do 7 days ago things get rushed, we didnt have anyone signed up to write at all until tuesday thats the only explanation I can give on that my matches were short because one was a squash and one was an opener

[Noah Hanson]

jordan you dont have to explain to me dude, i understand shit happens if i could have volunteered i would. my hands were pretty tied this week, worked on cars brakes twice and babysitting grandson. tell ya what put a hardcore match in there and i can write it.

[wrath]

Feb 27, 2014 19:28:35 GMT -5 Noah Hanson said:

Face of the Night: people keep saying Ojeda but i personally just dont see Ojeda as a face as i see as an antihero

Thank you Noah! I take that as a huge compliment as that's kind of what I was going for. Thank you for noticing.

[Noah Hanson]

Wrath your character makes me think a cross between stone cold and tommy dreamer

[wrath]

I would say that's kind of a fair comparison. Yeah. I do love me some Dreamer. He's an awesome dude.