Joey Harris
PWX Trainee
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Post by Joey Harris on Mar 4, 2014 0:23:19 GMT -5
I'm the new guy! Help a brother out, yes? Although I have actually been writing/ roleplaying since I was 15, I have been away from the game for about four years, so I know I am a bit rusty. Any and all feedback, comments, and criticism is welcome, wanted, and appreciated! pwxonline.proboards.com/post/4010 |
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Post by wrath on Mar 4, 2014 0:43:09 GMT -5
I actually rather enjoyed your first two RPs. you have a really nice and easy style. It's got a good flow to it. Your rust is showing a little bit, but I think you can do good things with the character.
The one negative I can say to this whole this is that, well... now I think he's Will Smith.The Hancock thing, And that's not like totally a bad thing, but it's the one negative i can pick up on.
All in all though, enjoying your work and definitely want you to stick around. You and Atwater had the best Welcome to PWX match in a very long time. Keep it up.
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Joey Harris
PWX Trainee
What is it you cherish most? Give me the pleasure of taking it away.
Posts: 76
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Post by Joey Harris on Mar 4, 2014 12:52:08 GMT -5
Thanks for the feedback! I personally thought the Hancock throwback would be a little much, as well lol. It's good to know I am doing something right!
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