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Caliban

Ojeda

Zion

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Rhonin

Elijah Black

Nighthawk

Darin Zion

John Ojeda

Jordan Caliban

Troy Stone

David Wilson

Brian Hollywood

Judges

Hollywood

SHOW COMMENTS: So let me just say this flat out..I apologize for the lateness of the show posting. My internet being disabled pushed everything back so I am sorry that it wasn't posted sooner. I also got into a rush getting it posted when my internet was finally enabled again so there might be a few errors through out the show...hopefully it looks good and I got everything in it...I didn't want to wait until this evening to post it so I did post it as soon as I could so hopefully it is satisfactory.

Segments were meh to be honest. There was awesome participation this week but wanted to see more. There were a couple I received overnight and earlier today and had the show been posted last night when it was supposed to, those segments wouldn't have even made the show so you guys are lucky it got put in there. Other than that, I have nothing to gripe about. However...

I know Zion mentioned something to me earlier about this and had I not been in such a huge hurry to get the show posted I would have caught this but there were some segments that needed to be corrected. I won't go into detail about that as I'm sure Zion will. I'll let him get his two cents in so I'll let him say his thoughts so he has at least something to say :-)

Other than that, I have nothing else to really gripe about. Good showing..one more ADR and this it's off to High Stakes. Alright, feedback formula below and now I'm turning it over to you guys so sound off!

Match of the Night

Underrated Match of the Night

Segment of the Night

Breakout Star

Face of the Night

Heel of the Night

Show Rating

Comments/Concerns

[codair]

Match of the Night- codair vs. caliban hands down, that match was intense

Underrated Match of the Night-Atwater vs. Black

Segment of the Night- The end, nuff said. I mean

Breakout Star- Rhonin

Face of the Night- i guess Stryker, Nighthawk, Codair, Ojeda, and blade

Heel of the Night- Hollywood as always

Show Rating- 4 outta 5, explain in my comments and cocerns

COmment and concerns, great job on matches this week, great job to everyone for showing, solid week on that. the segs were pretty good, however some didnt seem to fit. next week should be insane though.

[Darin Zion]

Hi there, Darin the resident nit picker. Yes, I had to do a ton of correction catches this week and honestly wanted to go over a lot of things with you guys here on how to use Brian Hollywood and Darin Zion and SHAWN LESTER going forward.

Shawn Lester won Office Space Massacre to become our Backstage announcer. NOT JERRY CLARK. Jerry Clark is the Establishment's personal janitor. So he's the guy cleaning the backstage area for you guys. Please use Shawn Lester, not Jerry Clark.

Please do not have Hollywood and Zion clobber each other by accident. I loved the idea until I took it to the boss. We then realized that it would make us both look like one of us has more power than the other in storyline. That definitely doesn't work so we had to edit a segment due to that fact. Zion and Hollywood have too much history to ignore accidents with each other. Zion won't accidentally hit Hollywood, and vice versa due to the fact that if we do; our characters as heels or faces will immediately start wanting to feud because of our back history. I personally had ideas for that move, but Brian and I both came to conclusion it wouldn't work storyline wise. So in short: Brian no hit Darin, Darin no hit Brian.

Thirdly, this goes back to us, when we have to edit, please make sure everything meshes up well....Shawn's name isn't Jerry . Your welcome for me nitpicking Brian.

Now with that said, I have to say this and have to stop being a negative nancy....GREAT JOB EVERYONE! Two minor issues that I'm acting like a diva about and other than that ,I'm proud of all our hard work. I'm just a grammar and storyline nut, but that's b/c I did what Brian does now on a weekly basis on PWX version 2 and I had a bunch of nut jobs in this fed that would CONSTANTLY ride my ass to be detailed oriented. So that carries to why I want perfection . But me whining about perfection doesn't mean we aren't doing good. It's just me being anal because I had to constantly look at details before. It doesn't mean you guys suck and i hate you. It means I probably should break a bad habit lol.

[Joey Harris]

I'm sorry for the format I will be using here, but I don't have a reliable method of "copy/ paste" from my iPhone. Instead, I will just throw out some scattered thoughts on this week's ADR.

- Having worked closely with her in many different efeds over the past 10 years, I want to be the first to say: Ravenna is going to be a player here in PWX. She and I both are still shaking loose a lot of rust right now, but I'm confident that Ravenna will impress everybody here with her character depth.

- Again tooting my own flute here, but things are just starting to hear up for Rhonin, and it will be go beyond this little spat between he and Brian Hollywood. Rhonin's true war is not with The Establishment, but within himself, and to anybody paying attention to my promos and segments, I promise you will not regret the investment.

- TJ Codair and Jordan Caliban stole the show with their match. I love the respectful nod at the end of their match, and feel it was genuine and sincere, but I also know well enough that it isn't the end of Caliban's evolution.

- The Establishment having Stryker arrested...classic! Takes me right back to WWE's Attitude Era, a la Steve Austin and Mr. McMahon.

- Brian Hollywood really loves putting friends/ partners/ loved ones against each other in the ring! It must be a perverse hobby of his. The segment between Nikki Blade and Wrath told a nice story of rebellion, but I feel it really lacked in detail and came across less "short and sweet," and more rushed. I understand that things were hectic with results, so it is passable.

Overall, a nice effort from everyone! We were all able to hold it together when facing true peril in Brian's internet failing, and we will come out stronger than before! Great showing, guys!

[Darin Zion]

I'll definitely explain the Codair vs. Caliban match in detail. I wanted both men to steal the show as they've had an ADR feud moment. I knew they wanted to move onto bigger and better things so I wanted to take both men and turn them into gold. I think they're truly our cornerstone to our Hybrid Division besides our champion and they're future players as time goes on. So just in case they wanted to feud after ADR, I wanted to set them up with fans asking for one more match and I wanted to set them up for an out if they wanted to continue that direction. It definitely made for a good warm moment.

Ravenna from her RP does look like a major character as well as you Rhonin. I cannot wait to see where you guys evolve to.


This tag tourney has been my favorite thing due to the fact that it's been surprise after surprise! I love it.

Anyways, I don't have a lot more to say, so yeah. Great job .

[Mascara Muerto]

I only have one issue with the show and that was the whole kissing thing in the tag match. For Norte that to me is a break in his character. I could see Muerto doing that because he is meant to be more funny since he doesn't 'talk' but even then he wouldn't roll up his mask either even though there is no gap for the mouth but that's just what he would do.

But as far as Norte goes I didn't like that it happened with him. I feel it is a break in his character.

[Darin Zion]

Muerto, I appreciate you letting us know that one for sure. That one goes back to...IDK who it goes back to, but whoever did it should definitely PM you and apologize for not checking in with you ahead of time.

As for match writing, don't make me have to make this a prematch match strat fed with Hollywood gents. We do give you great liberties, and I don't plan on doing that, but yeah, I am surprised I didn't catch that when I did my massive proofs of all our errors this week as they're lucha characters and that's no no in lucha wrestling. But yeah, I can assure you that's noted and will not happen as I'll check for that in the Tag Team Match finals . I don't think you have to worry about Vox Populi and Bad Company rolling up your masks and having a make out session with you . Unless that floats their boats. But in all seriousness, won't happen again with the masks unless noted or approved. Otherwise I'll shred ass . Same with Caliban's stuff too! Anyone puts him in the Establishment and I'll fling poo!

No in all seriousness this would be our first accident and Zion's acting like a diva. I'm not worried, I'm trying to play the hard ass to have fun, while doing some clean up. Rest assured, we take your comments seriously, unless we hire Ryan James Dio to read the feedback threads, which unfortunately, he's not a real person, and he sucks anyways, so we take your comments seriously.

Brian Hollywood
Do you know who wrote said tag match, and can you PM them to let them know what Muerto did, just not bring it up on the boards. That way we clear the air. Thank you!

[jordancaliban]

I'll take responsibility for it but frankly I did not reveal your characters face anymore than a normal Luchadore does on a pretty regular basis, and the action was done in retaliation for the disrespect shown to Muerto in the first place, I was trying to tell a story at stupid oclock in the morning. Sorry, it wont happen again

[Mascara Muerto]

I apologize for people thinking I was more offended than I actually was by the whole thing. I didn't know who wrote the match and I didn't want to start a PM hunt down of who did because I felt that would have made things worse and would have made it seem that again I was way more offended than I really was.

As I said it was just something in relation to Norte that I didn't like and that was it. I wasn't trying to call for a Stake Burning of whoever wrote the match.

Me and Caliban will keep this to PMs.