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Post by PWXonline on Apr 23, 2014 23:35:12 GMT -5
Matches
Hollywood
Rhonin
Ojeda
Stryker
Codair
Segments
Tiami Tyler
Elijah Black
Mascara Muerto
Bad Company
TJ Codair
Judges
Hollywood
SHOW COMMENTS: The show is UP before midnight!! Sorry, just had to make fun of myself there. I wanted to get the show up at ten, but had a minor miscommunication with where one of the matches were but that was really it. Remember, ALL matches and segments are to be sent to my Hollywood account. Other than that, there were no other issues getting the show up on time.
Segments....I'm not going to be very picky on them this week. Everyone had long and hard weeks last week and I think people were kinda burned out. I know I was with all the job hunting and shit. Keeps me busy. Corey hasn't had his baby yet from what I understand but I know he was busy with that this week. No worries there either. Everyone was busy in their own right and that's completely understandable. Just make sure to take note at the very light show this week. Despite the busy week a lot of people had, there were segments that were still done and RPs that were very stellar! This was the Go Home show and I would have loved a loaded show but under the circumstances, I know it was a rough week.
Next week is the Initiative PPV! I expect a LOADED show! Remember, fully written matches. Entrances and shit like that. Let's get back into the groove of things next week with loads of segments! It's going to be a fucking exciting show so let's get pumped up for it!!! I'll have the PPV card posted later tonight and then the RP threads late late tonight or early tomorrow depending on when I crash so be looking for those.
Alright, going to leave this to you guys now. Sound off below.
Match of the Night
Underrated Match of the Night
Segment of the Night
Breakout Star
Face of the Night
Heel of the Night
Show Rating
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Post by codair on Apr 24, 2014 4:35:47 GMT -5
im not giving my feedback,
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Post by Darin Zion on Apr 24, 2014 19:22:28 GMT -5
Well first off I'm going to start with a Darin to staff feedback. We experienced our first flop. Ill straight out admit that and not try to sell you on this. I've never had to rate a show a 3.5 before in my entire history of being here in pwx. Now before I open up with honesty I want you guys to here me out. I'm not passing the buck on this. I could blame so many issues but i flopped myself. I totally dropped the ball on my segments as life came up. So honestly, we failed as a team and we need to take this failure and grow. So with that I want to share my highlights. Why? I don't want to dwell on the shit. We know what happened its life and we still love you guys. We all had a hand and we are still proud. Brock: nice job stepping up! I'm giving you your props! You beat one of our PWX CONTENDERS! Great impact! Rhonin and Rav...Roxie: great job with your storyline! I'm proud of you guys for making your feud the highlight of the night! Codair: great job on your work with chase! Chase: proud of you stepping up and putting tons of effor into your rp this week! I liked the results of your rp! I honestly feel you keep building up more description you'll become a threat! Prince: I haven't told you I'm proud of your impact in stepping up! Keep on keeping on I see tons of potential! Anyways anyone else I missed who put effort like mascara not that I didn't like your stuff it's just honestly we hadn't seen you guys for a few weeks but I'm glad we have you here and if I missed you don't be offended I want you to know I love you all and take this as loving words and take that hype and immediately swing super hard for our gates. I know I dropped the ball and we can make I notice a surprise show from this  . |
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Post by Noah Hanson on Apr 24, 2014 19:56:38 GMT -5
Match of the Night: Main Event, nicely written
Underrated Match of the Night: Brock/Stryker
Segment of the Night: none stood out
Breakout Star: Brock...hell of job dude
Face of the Night: Right now i have no clue because there are still not alot of true faces
Heel of the Night: PIck someone from the Establishment because its starting to become the nWo
Show Rating: C- one of the lowest rated i have seen in a while.
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Post by codair on Apr 24, 2014 20:21:38 GMT -5
ok, im going to be brutally honest, and im going to make sure people understand what im saying, so no humor, no friendly banter, this is going to be straight up.
First off, the pics for the week not being up for the show, that was my fault, i was wiped from work, and forgot to mail em to Brian, my pics aitn the greatest, but i got three weeks doing this so thats the way they are, i work my ass off for this place, to the point where im forcefully teaching myself how to do shit I have no idea how to do. NO schooling, no one showing, just a shit load of crash courses and fuck ups. Ya live, ya learn, ya go with it, until finally ya get better. Same can be said about rping, same can be said bout writing matches, same can be said about everything in life. I have said this to Zion, now i will put it in open forum, and i will probably not be well liked for saying it and truthfully i couldnt care less because it needs to be said. This was the take home show, this was the show to set up a ppv for one hell of a night. I wont butter this up for anyone.This was dissapointing, and that is me being very nice.
tyler and hollywood, short, brief, eluding to something more in the future. Could it have been for the show or in the future. WHo knows.
siren vs aires, shit flop match, why siren no showed, aires showed, his work wasted, and in turn the match was wasted, and a clearly amusing twist she got shit canned and aires sitting there going what the fuck, guarentee thats how he felt when reading the results.
Ravenna vs. Rhonin. then of course, the seg after. Was very interesting, actually. You see this more artistic and cd and i enjoyed it, because to me this was a huge highlight of the show, there for maybe a huge saving grace to it, and gives the need to watch for me scenario.
Bad Company and Mascara meeting, I wanted to see more, it wasnt dissapointing, it was a build up. I get that and can appreciate it.
Brock vs. Stryker i was disapointed with, a match of respect in my opinion due to waht i saw was hard on Styker more so then brock. stryker didnt bring the fire he normally does, but he showed and did a good rp. The match well it was definatly a decent match, but i think it needed mroe.
Black/ Everett seg.Great seg, i liked and dug it.
My seg, lacked direction, not nearly as fun as it had been, nor did i really enjoy doing it. I will come and say that.
Prince vs. Blade, Blink, blink, wtf. Alright, i know about the circumstances involved, and gotta say this match was done right. Instead of jobbing her for no showing because of shit she is dealing with it was a story line arc, With what happened, and how the match/seg, whatever that was, it worked and i can appreciate it.
Codair vs. Chase- Match I wrote, match i wish could have been better. But thank you noah for the kind words. To be honest, i wish Anton posted a second rp, cause my second rp was shit. Outright, and i will be honest about it. Chase good rp.
Now that i got that out of the way. 5 er 6 segments, 5 er 4 matches, how many people did not show up for the show, who could have sent soemthing in hyping themselves, an issue, a fuck it im getting drunk seg, a hype for the ppv, any thing. Reallistically anything hell, get caught fucking a fan, whatever i don't care show that there is something going on here. we got a lot of new charectors coming in weekly looking to become a part of this fed because of last weeks show, the week before's show, the show before that, the ppvs, the fact we all bust our ass. I get people get tired down, worked down tired. but when people rely on you, go through with it. one way or another,We do not single handedly pull this show off, we do it as a team, everyone. RPs, Segs, Matches, wrestlers, staff, whatever the fuck i am and who ever is in the same position i am in. We all need to fucking shoot for the stars at the ppv, because like noah said earlier with the rating of c-, one of the lowest ratings i have seen in awhile, that should have been a clue.
NOW I gotta give some positive output from me being a complete fucking asshole, however i felt it needed to be said, and Zion suggested i should, one day he will learn. Oh well, that being said We got a chance to pick this shit up to the next level and raise the bar. Yes the bar is low now, because we put it there as a collective, not just by one person. We all need to step up, and bust our asses.
Chase, good rp, i like the direction you went in it, took me by surprise. keep up the momentum, seriously, in a championship match dude, fucking hammer the limit and go full tilt and for the fucking throat.
Brock, great effort this week, good job in your match
Stryker, i know what ya got behind ya man, and even though hes your friend, ya need to rip his head off and be the bad ass mother fucker you are.
Ravenna Rhonin, great job this week, i just wanted ya to know i wasnt sure what the hell was going on, so i read romeo and Juliet and got caught up, im just fucking with ya.
Prince: your the fucking man, im glad to have ya on board here, im a mark already.
If no one can figure it out, i wanted more out of this show, and im highly dissapointed. no one likes me and everyone wants to bash me, oh well, least i had the balls to come out and say it instead of keeping quiet. This needed to be said because we all want the push, we all need the push, well guys ya wanna push, ya need to push someone. and pray you aint the last in line.
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Post by Noah Hanson on Apr 24, 2014 20:45:25 GMT -5
Codair, you are spot on with everything you said no need to apologize at least not to me, it needed to be said and i tip my hat to you for doing it.
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Post by Darin Zion on Apr 24, 2014 21:35:14 GMT -5
Yes I appreciate you being spot on.
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Post by Darin Zion on Apr 24, 2014 21:40:04 GMT -5
As for Stryker and Brock I'll look into that one.
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Post by brockwhitworth on Apr 24, 2014 22:32:39 GMT -5
Match of the Night: Codair's was great, definitely a highlight
Underrated Match of the Night: Dave, while absolutely exhausted this week, wrote a good match. I'll give it to mine, although that sounds douchey. I was happy with the match
Segment of the Night: It's been said before, so I won't beat a dead horse, but segments were rough this week for whatever reason, and I understand that. In terms of adding to a storyline, that first one may have some impact going further, so we'll see.
Breakout Star: I don't know, I'm happy with my effort, but honestly, with the amount of no-shows it's tough to pick
Face of the Night: I don't know
Heel of the Night: The Establishment gains power again. They're a lot of fun to watch.
Show Rating: Not high, probably a C
Comments/Concerns: I don't mean to sound pretentious here, because I'm new, but these no-shows are killing us. It'll sort itself out, those that put in the effort will stay. Everyone has tough weeks, I understand that. I'm pumped for the PPV. Hopefully we can turn out the product that we're used to.
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Post by wrath on Apr 24, 2014 22:43:33 GMT -5
See what happens when I take a week off.
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Post by Brian Hollywood on Apr 25, 2014 1:13:40 GMT -5
Now everyone understands how much I STRESS involvement and getting active.
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Post by Brian Hollywood on Apr 25, 2014 1:20:08 GMT -5
This is YOUR show everyone. I cannot do it alone. If I don't get involvement I have no problem making it the Brian Hollywood show. I would greatly prefer that I don't bc even I would get tired of myself and that's saying something.
I do get late segments from people and I warned that was gonna stop. There were a couple extra segments I got AFTER I posted the show and I said I wasn't waiting for them anymore. I'm starting to get these shows up on time so please get your stuff sent to me by the time I set for you all. Otherwise it won't get put into the show and you'll just have to post it in the 24/7 section.
Also Ojeda in light for you taking off one week shit still got done and into me on time. Minus that one match but that was simply a miscommunication and sent to the wrong person. Everyone still stepped up and took a match in light of you being gone so really shit didn't get out of control with you taking the week off.
Other than that I don't have much other to add to the conversation.
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Post by Darin Zion on Apr 25, 2014 5:42:06 GMT -5
Yeah honestly I will agree but it's our show too ! I'm not saying it's all one persons fault this week. I do feel everyone including myself could have stepped up and done a better job with a go home. I think you did good with all life circumstances considered and same with everyone else. It happens. This is not the week we pass the buck and go oh it's so and so or oh this person brings down the show or yada yada yada. This is the week we look at this show and say we failed in our go home edition. And while we went down here's what I have to say....we all work as a team and we should look at this show and remember we are hashtag pwx for life! And that's what what the point of this. So yes how do we make our ppv amazing? We jump out and hype our next show! We make it better Bc we have talent. We shouldn't look at this and go oh man we sucked and no one appreciates us. We should go welp back to the drawing board and it's time to prove the critics wrong. And this made me realize I need to stop slacking! So instead of passing the buck we need to totally and utterly go in, take the feedback and improve. Otherwise it isn't feedback! And now I'm off to write rps so I can have segments! I'm going to lead by example! I want to lead the charge |
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