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Post by Caleb Houston on Apr 25, 2014 20:28:08 GMT -5
Soo... anyone have any feedback. Haven't written since 2008/2009.
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Post by Joey Harris on Apr 25, 2014 23:00:14 GMT -5
I dig it! Having come up with Caleb Houston, it is really easy for me to feel Caleb's pain and frustration in this roleplay, and I dig the symmetry in his addiction, because it is not just limited to the drugs that he been battling to break away from for years now, but it's also his addiction to competing. Both keep dragging him back in, and you can really feel for just how desperately he wants out. Unfortunately, an addict will always find an excuse to keep up his habit, as did Caleb when he returned Blade's call to get back into the business. This is a very sweet introduction to Caleb Houston in PWX, and I'm excited to see what is in store for him next. Well, not too excited. But pretty excited.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 27, 2014 0:03:42 GMT -5
I LOVED IT!! Just as Rho/Joe said, I could feel for him. I'm straight edge, but I've always been addicted to one thing...the computer. I could go on about that, but in short form, it's led me to totally neglect myself. Which in turn, has caused me to lose so many people that were important to me, including the gal of my dreams... HJQ. And it's also pretty much led me to being kicked out of every fed I've been in... cuz my attitude is often one of the casualties of staying up for two-three days at a time, not eating, drinking, taking my meds... haven't eaten today. And I ended up in the hospital for the first time back in Dec.'12, after fainting from dehydration and malnutrition.
An addiction can destroy a person, regardless of what that person is addicted to.
As for the RP itself? I was instantly drawn into the character. I could tell that he would end up returning to 'the game'... the thing I'm wondering about is, what does Rho mean by 'coming up with the character'? Was it one of his old characters, and he handed it off to you? I've seen a few people do that, and sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't. Often, the person taking over the character won't do very well, cuz it wasn't their vision... I've only taken over two characters, Pigeon and Pete Trabel, in a parody fed called Brawlers on a Budget. And... the original handlers didn't care for my portrayal. They didn't find my work as the two characters funny, so they kinda regreted turning them over to me >.<
But in THIS case? I have a feelin' Rho isn't as disappointed as they were in me. Looks like you hit it right on the head, and I, for one, am DEFINITELY looking forward to where things go from here. Very, very well done intro piece.
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Post by Caleb Houston on Apr 27, 2014 2:49:38 GMT -5
Rhonin has been around Caleb since I made him back in 08. He had a new character that was a tag team partner with Caleb. So he's seen Caleb from the first few crappy RPs to the world championship ones. kinda like he saw the character grow before his eyes. Is what I think he meant.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 27, 2014 10:06:29 GMT -5
Ahhh, ok, that makes sense. Like he helped mold him, I totally understand that. And I can tell he evolved, just like with Rhonin. Just like I told Rho, a writer takes leaps and bounds from where they begin. Ya oughta see a lot of my old stuff, ESPECIALLY back in '01-'03, it was ABYSMAL >.< But yeah, now though? I can see you have World Title written all over you. As I told Rho, I would LOVE to have one of The Crue involved with Caleb, cuz I can tell we could put some great material together. Keep puttin' in work, and there's no doubt C.H. is gonna go far here. No doubt about it. ~ $hane-o EDIT: btw....fukkin' LOVE the tag-line : 'i like turtles'. I REMEMBER THAT!! I knew I liked you right from the moment I saw that! XD
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Post by Joey Harris on Apr 27, 2014 13:41:46 GMT -5
Caleb Houston likes big butts, and he cannot tell a lie.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2014 4:07:48 GMT -5
#BabyGotBack
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