Caleb Houston RP

[Caleb Houston]

Thoughts? Comments? Feel like I might be getting back to where I was with Caleb. Any sort of feedback will be greatly appreciated. 

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Thoughts -- It was a roleplay.

Comments -- I didn't read it.

Feedback -- Eat at Joe's.

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Real Feedback -- Coming tomorrow, after I get some rest.

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[Joey Harris]

We've talked about this in private already but I'll be a little more in-depth here. I feel like you are getting back on track with a character with whom you've always shined. What makes Caleb Houston a great character is that he feels very real, he's entirely relate-able (is that even a real word?), and he struggles with demons that I'm sure everybody is familiar with on some level. As a character, it's easy to sympathize with Caleb, because he's less a monster and more a victim.

As far as the RP, itself, I think you did a great job of really capturing Caleb's anger and frustration, particularly his encounter with "mom," and you also did extraordinary work when illustrating Caleb's inner struggle with whether or not her needed his pills. We all know how it ended, obviously, and I really felt legit disappointment in Caleb. You translate your words into real emotion, and that's what makes your story so compelling. I can tell that you are still working with a bit of rust as far as your shoot goes, but it was still great and I feel you covered all your bases while still slamming Whitworth with Caleb's confidence, and arrogance.

Caleb Houston is going to be a fucking player here in PWX. He's no Joey Harris or Roxxie Roberts, but...you know.